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Chills
Contributed by
monkey
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 11:04:21 PM in AEST
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I get chills
up and down
my spine
when we fight
because I think
'Is this it?
Is our friendship over?'
I have no idea
what to think
you call me a *****
whenever you're mad
but now that I say it
you deny it
I dont understand you
But yet again I do
I wish we wouldnt fight
over such a dumb thing
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monkey
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2004-01-08 23:04:21]
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Re: Chills
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:06:59 AM AEST
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It is hard when you fight often with someone close and say words you cannot take back. I liked your poem and I have had the same thoughts a time or two. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Chills
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:35:02 AM AEST
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Very good.. You have a quick mind I see. Ever notice though, we seem to fight more with those we are closer to, then we do with those we just consider a friend.. Very good write, keep them coming. I like reading your poems...
Majestic
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