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What I Feel Inside
Contributed by
Elf
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:56:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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sometimes i wish
I could hide.
From all these people.
And what I feel inside.
My heart says yes.
My mind says no.
Which way I want
I do not know.
But what I feel,
I do not doubt
Its what i think
that I could live without.
For in my mind,
lies the though
The one that hurts
and makes my voice get cought.
because every time
and every day
when I see you
I've lost what to say.
But you do not
Judge me for it.
You love me even more.
Despite of it.
So every time
I see your face
I see the love
Whos end I cannot trace.
And just as thus
you do return
my love and all,
you do not spurn.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-01-08 16:56:55]
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Re: What I Feel Inside
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:16:32 PM AEST
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| wow, that was very nice kiddo. I have the same problem dear..sucks don't it? Hang in there, hope everything turns out well for you in the end. |
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Re: What I Feel Inside
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:12:28 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, and wording though sad but I really like it! |
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Re: What I Feel Inside
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:48:23 PM AEST
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This is such a loving write.
I hope everything comes together for you.
Keep your head up and don't give up on love.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: What I Feel Inside
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:48:00 AM AEST
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| This is an amazing poem. I can totally relate to what you are saying. |
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