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Formerly known
Contributed by
formerly_known
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:02:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ill tame this lion of flesh before the night is over.
My love will not let me rest till my mind is sober.
Reputations form my past chained so tight.
You break free you break fast on my descision tonight.
Formerly known as nothing and no one.
Formerly known as lost.
I've been sold by lies from former generations, who tell me " whats its worth having a hold on a cheap sensation?"
But you ask me in this moment who i say i am?!
A new Creation. A woman
They dont have to understand.
I will not be bound by what they tell me I can be.
I will not be silent.
I will speak my Liberty
I am a independant Woman
Copyright ©
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2004-01-08 16:02:46]
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Re: Formerly known
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:47:02 PM AEST
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let me just say welcome
i liked this alot
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Re: Formerly known
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by MrWrite on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:51:07 PM AEST
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| A great poem with a strong message. Good job. |
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Re: Formerly known
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:56:34 AM AEST
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| I really liked the tone of your poem. It is good that you stick to what you believe in. |
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Re: Formerly known
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:48:42 PM AEST
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Good write. Ecspecially at such a young age.
' whats its worth having a hold on a cheap sensation'
I don't think I've ever heard that before... I guess I'm too young? At 21... Ah well. Lol. I would have to say it depends on the person.
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