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The Picture Fades
Contributed by
POOBEAR
on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 02:26:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I have seen all of the beauty
that can be seen in this life.
My remote, vantage point,
overtaken by anger and hopelessness
quietly implodes.
I have looked at life
as if it were an oil painting
hanging on the wall.
When you distance yourself
from it , you see a well defined picture.
Something with substance.
But as you slowly,cautiously
step closer and closer,
the picture begins to lose it's identity.
I have taken many steps forward
only to find that my many efforts have failed
to leave any impression ,
or trace of my existence behind.
Stronger, louder voices
always drown out my own.
Once again they will prevail.
They have succeded in provoking
my eternal silence.
Copyright ©
POOBEAR
... [
2002-07-13 14:26:06]
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Re: The Picture Fades
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 09:24:50 AM AEST
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This heads my list of favourites of yours Lynn...it's so profound. Excellent!
Love you lots
Chrissie x |
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Re: The Picture Fades
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 02:36:04 PM AEST
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Here, you always have a voice... always.
Ginsdance |
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Re: The Picture Fades
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by princesspurty on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 09:47:41 AM AEST
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| very well wrote and so sad, excellent! |
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