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To John, the one I love
Contributed by
MissLee
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:24:02 PM in AEST
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My dearest one
Your heart shines as bright as the sun
When this life of mine is done
I know you will be the only one
That I loved with all my heart
You've had me from the start
You will leave again in a few days
But you will be with me in so many ways
Thank you for everything
To me you mean more than anything
You are the love of my life
Oh how I wish I could be your wife
-Thank you to everyone who commented on my poems, I appreciated it very much, good bye-
Copyright ©
MissLee
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2004-01-08 15:24:02]
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Re: To John, the one I love
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by Solmyr1404 on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:37:36 PM AEST
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| Too bad this one is your last. It was very good. |
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Re: To John, the one I love
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by MissTea on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:18:13 PM AEST
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Its sad to know that such a brilliant poet as yourself will not be posting your poems here any longer.
MissLee, keep on writing, even if it never gets seen, your poetry will be your door to success!
Your poem was amazing, i felt the love in it, the lose in it, the tears u might have cried over it. I pray that you get what u want in life, and that it treats you well!!
we'll miss ya
Diane |
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Re: To John, the one I love
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 08:12:22 PM AEST
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See ya!
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Re: To John, the one I love
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:10:36 PM AEST
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well written and full of love...please keep writing it is the window to our souls and helps us in so many ways..sorry to see you
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Re: To John, the one I love
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:41:15 PM AEST
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| Wow.... Wtf happened. |
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Re: To John, the one I love
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:34:28 AM AEST
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good poem I've noticed that u want to be lots of ppl's wives have u ever considered being someone's husband???
Bobo (Joel) |
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