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Aurora
Contributed by
Blaze
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:54:08 PM in AEST
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NaturePoetry
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To the northern reaches of the evening sky,
Dimmed by the land's wintry grove,
A virid serpent squirms the eye,
Whose greenish trail, overhead, arches by,
As its several allies join the rove.
The hunters, whose tails emit a reddish hue
At the edge of sky and sea,
As arctic zephyrs quickly grew,
The trav’lers twine, scatter, and sky renew;
Deep, mossy waters ripple jubilee.
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Blaze
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2004-01-08 14:54:08]
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Re: Aurora
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by Manicmuze on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:54:41 PM AEST
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Your imagery here is very visual... enchanting piece of writing.
Enjoyed this,
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Re: Aurora
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:15:43 AM AEST
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Alas! I have never seen the aurora. I went to Alaska, but it was summer, so I never even saw it dark! Great poem, by the way. You use very intelligent yet graceful language.
Keep it up!
Andrew |
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