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Beginnings
Contributed by
AbstractMinded
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:21:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Grey day afternoon setting on a sullen world
Pieces of mischief collected in the gutters
While the lights took control.
Starlight invisible-the moon seems over melancholy
Misery in a hollow sphere-almost unknown
To be controlled is to be forgotten for what you really are
Yet without times drag world would hold you unnoticed.
***
She sits around her table, lounging tiger
Lioness at play; seeking words for you
“Is all working out? I mean…in the end?”
How to reply to a vulture, carnivore
-“Evenly alone. Almost left undone”
Staring raptor; cupped hands; sour tea.
Sorrow; exit room leaving hyena to pick words over.
***
Something else always bothers me
Cupid’s arrow cracked like a hairline.
Little beknown to me; faulty love.
Sickly sweet we wait for time,
The axis of balance holds times coat
Justice stands unused by the door
And I need a word with his ownliness.
***
Flowery midday; brush into water
Stick with yourself; you’re on to a winner.
Studying love for a landscape.
Research-“Little left, Right arm”
But does not recline for you; poor lonely soul.
Think about your tones/colours
Where did it all wash wrong?
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AbstractMinded
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2004-01-08 14:21:10]
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Re: Beginnings
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:44:38 PM AEST
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your user name suits the way you write it was different and i will be looking forward to reading some of your other stuff
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Re: Beginnings
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by LiveTheDream on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:34:58 PM AEST
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Glad to see your poems on here hun and i too will be looking forward to more...
Good write, as usual (and i understand it now lol)
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