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Loving You
Contributed by
xDeex
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:14:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Movies were watched,
Pianos were played,
When all this took place,
I loved you,
Birds took flight,
Church bells chimed,
But I didn't relize any of it,
'Cause I love you,
And I still do.
Time seems to stop,
Everytime I see you,
My heart seems to race,
Everytime I'm with you,
My knees go weak,
Everytime you hold me,
I'm in love with an angel.
Clouds pass by,
And your with me,
Storms head in,
And you hold me,
We sit by a fire,
And you tell me you love me,
And now I know its true love,
`Cause i feel the same too.
You wrap me in your arms,
And forever I will stay,
You kiss me one more time,
And all my fears wash away.
Copyright ©
xDeex
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2004-01-08 13:14:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Loving You
(User Rating: 1 ) by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:18:44 PM AEST (User
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awww, thats such a lovely poem. So full of love... A brilliant write, congratulations!
Alec Fernandez
(Time to take a stand, and read and comment on more poetry, laziness is not an option) |
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Re: Loving You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Putteragain on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:19:34 PM AEST (User
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this is so sweet i loved it song or poem it is beautiful
michelle |
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Re: Loving You
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:36:41 AM AEST (User
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i am the person that wrote this.....my friend submitted this for me, and i just wanna thank everyone who likes it, for telling me that! im an inspiring artist, and that kind of feedback ls good to hear |
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