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Sirens Eclipse
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:32:32 PM in AEST
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I found you there
looking hot in that dress.
Had to take you home.
On your bed I
tied you down tight.
Played all over you
with ice to warm up.
You shivered in delight.
Pulling tight against bonds.
Body straining so beautifully.
Candle light illuminates
just enough to catch
you in sweet orgasm
one that I had to taste.
Sweetest nectar ever had.
Kissed your lips as I came
into you so deeply.
Gazing into your eyes
telling you just what
I was going to do.
Gasping with each word.
Cut you free of bonds.
You pulled my hair and bit.
Scratched my back 'til blood dripped
as you whispered make me dirty.
Called you what you begged
and slapped as gentle as let.
You wanted top so
I obliged you that.
You know I always
loved to watch you work.
Hours passed since
I got you home.
Bodies tired and
drenched in sweat.
Finally passed to sleep.
Awoken later yearning
for more of your sweetness.
Still so sweaty moved to
take a nice long shower.
The faulty phoenix
This one sucked and was not worthy of being in the book but it didn't come out quite right. Stupid distractions.
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-01-08 12:32:32]
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:40:32 PM AEST
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WOW AND WOW AND WOW!
WHAT AN AMAZING WRITE....AH........TO BE YOUNG AGAIN!
LOVINGCRITTERS
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:48:53 PM AEST
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It doesnt suck, its a good write, never ever downplay your poetry, because every poetry is a good piece of poetry, because its poetry, and because its emotion. Dont do that to yourself, because you have great skills, and you should cherish every single piece of work you make!
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by mercedes on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:49:56 PM AEST
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| You are much too hard on yourself Jeff. This is not as detailed as the others but it is still very good. |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:50:22 PM AEST
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| Hmmm another great hot poem! great work! |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:51:58 PM AEST
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| I was interupted 8 times. It sucked because it was not more descriptive than the last. Next time I kill my family after the first interuption... The next one will have the same title. I am just going to pretend this was a warm up for the real one. |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:58:48 PM AEST
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very hot very sexy yuummyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant wait to read the next
michelle
oh it did make me blush |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:41:10 PM AEST
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I thought it was a really good one, in my opinion. I know I get all fidgety when I read your poetry......My lip has a permanent whole in it, yep i'm addicted...
Kie |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:35:05 PM AEST
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"Gasping with each word.
Cut you free of bonds.
You pulled my hair and bit.
Scratched my back 'til blood dripped
as you whispred make me dirty.
Called you what you begged
and slapped as gentle as let.
You wanted top so
I obliged you that"
Wow! It definitely doesn't suck!! Great write!
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by karoody on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:49:36 PM AEST
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if this is not one of your better, than i shall read on...very sensual...i enjoyed this
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:48:09 PM AEST
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steamy!!!!!!!!!!!!this is hotter than this desert I live in lol and NO it doesnt suck
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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Wowie!!! Yes ConSue...to be young again!!!
Another great write, Jeff....
Jenni |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST
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I do agree it's not as good as the others, especially the last one, but it's still pretty damn good. I think the ending was a little weak.. but who am I to criticize? Keep the heat coming! Can't wait for the next one. Hehe.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by norm on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:46:34 PM AEST
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I used to tie my girls in bed,
Until I found out when I read,
If they want to recipracate,
By time they're loose it's far too late |
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Re: Sirens Eclipse
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by jeanie on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 04:26:03 PM AEST
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wow, stunning :D nicely put, I liked it :D
jeanie |
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