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Letter to you
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:07:48 PM in AEST
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I remember the first time you held me,
Still only a few months old, you could see
Something special that no-one else could
Something that only you understood
And I still cherish this memory,
Even though your fading from me
Its eating you from the inside
Its so terrible that it has to hide
You dont know whats going on
Your own death has begun
And you don't know
I dont want you to leave me
Dont leave, I love you, please
You mean everything to myself
Always there when I needed help
But now your going away
And your memory will forever stay
And to you, I write this letter
Hoping that you'd get better
You are the light of my life
Brighter than the cold steel knife
Please allow me to say goodbye
But I cant because you are so far
Beyond the wheels of a car
I'm going to miss you
But somehow; I'll know I'll get through
So I write this letter to you
To Explain that i'll always miss you
And in my heart you'll miss me too
Yours forever now and when your gone
Your grandson
Dedicado a mi abuelo; Nunca me olvidaré de usted
Alex
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alecfernadez
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2004-01-08 12:07:48]
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Re: Letter to you
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by Halcyon_Daze on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:17:43 PM AEST
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This is sweet lovely write about abuela, Grandmother must be proud!!!!!!
Smile,
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Re: Letter to you
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by Halcyon_Daze on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:18:59 PM AEST
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This is sweet lovely write about abuela, Grandmother must be proud!!!!!!
Smile,
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Re: Letter to you
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:57:19 PM AEST
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| *Sigh* This one was really touching. I can feel that the words come from your heart. Your grandfather is a lucky person to have so much love. Its very sad when someone you love die and it takes a lot to submit something like this, I really admire you. A piece of art from the heart is priceless |
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Re: Letter to you
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:01:47 PM AEST
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your grandmother must be very proud of you what an emotional write and you shared it with us thank you
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Re: Letter to you
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by MissTea on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:59:39 PM AEST
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WOW, this is an amazing poem Alex! The love for your grandmother has truly shone through. The one thing about grandmothers, is that they don't care what we look like, speak like, act like. they don't care about our past or if we fail in the future, they only care about US - YOU! they seem like the only family that love, for who the person is and not what!!
U made me want to cry Alex, Brilliant write my man!!
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