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Just Like That
Contributed by
all_for_loving_you
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 11:34:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Under your skin,
Is where I dwell.
Since you left me,
I've been dead...
Just like that.
And when you left,
You took me with you...
Just like that.
Dead.
Lost.
Alone.
Hurt.
Why?
I don't understand.
All I want,
Is to crawl back,
Under your skin.
There,
I felt whole.
Because I knew I was with you always.
Have you even noticed?
Do you even care?
Are you even sorry?
Promises.
All broken.
Along with my heart...
Just like that.
Did you even bother,
To bury me?
Or did you just think it was okay,
To take my life?
You think,
Everything's alright.
Not for me, sorry.
Are you happy now?
If you were to tell me so,
I would not believe you.
Lies,
Is what you tell me.
So you take my life,
And you lie?
Just like that?
Stop hiding behind that mask.
This isn't the real you.
I know who you really are.
You've betrayed me,
You even drove me crazy.
How could you?
I trusted you.
I gave you all of me.
My soul.
My mind.
My heart.
You sold my soul;
You trashed my mind;
You broke my heart...
Just like that
Someday you'll realize,
The pain you put me through.
Someday you'll see.
Maybe then,
You will love me again.
Just like that.
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all_for_loving_you
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2004-01-08 11:34:50]
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Re: Just Like That
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by xDeex on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 11:41:38 AM AEST
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| very profound.. i really enjoyed the style you chose to exspress these thoughts.. keep 'em coming! |
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Re: Just Like That
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by all_for_loving_you on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:03:36 PM AEST
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| :) |
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Re: Just Like That
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:33:14 PM AEST
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| at the same time breathless, angry and highly emotive, this is a great write |
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Re: Just Like That
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:16:22 PM AEST
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| This was really good and spoke right to me. I loved this. It was wonderful. |
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