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I'm All Over You...
Contributed by
xDeex
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 11:26:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Iritated,
agervated,
couldn't be more frusterated..
don't know how..
don't know why..
all i can say is your *hopeless*
~~~~~~~~~
Just because,
It went by fast,
Doen't mean the memories won't last,
`Cause times takes its toll,
And things happen,
Maybe by chance,
Or fear,
Or distrust,
But still, just remember it's true...
The memories not over,
They're still with you...
~~~~~~~~~
Truth or lies?
Either way...
In the end..
Truth WILL reveal itself from within,
And when this happens,
You will see....
Truth will declare the victory.
Copyright ©
xDeex
... [
2004-01-08 11:26:21]
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Re: I'm All Over You...
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by Pyrochick on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:04:14 PM AEST
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| I really like the last one its cool and true |
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Re: I'm All Over You...
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:39:56 PM AEST
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I like ALL of em, short but very very very sweet. You can see your emotions on display clearly, and I like that in a poem.
Keep up the good work
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Re: I'm All Over You...
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by eternal_sorrows on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:54:16 PM AEST
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I really liked this alot. It kept my interest from beginning to end!
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