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a plead from my heart
Contributed by
whisper-of-night
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 08:03:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If only, I could turn back the hand of time,
I will wish, I had never met you;
If only, I could get you off my mind,
Then once more, I'll be a happy man.
But it is too late now,
For I missed you day and night,
Time after time....
Do you know, oh, do you know that?
The first moment I saw you,
My heart race like a drum;
The very moment I watch you smile,
I knew, I've found the perfect one;
And that destined moment,
When our two eyes met,
It was the moment I realized,
You are all I ever dream of,
You are everything I want, in my life!
Tell me girl, oh, tell me:
How can I possibly act right?!
Every time you came into my sight,
My heart gets weaker,
I could think of nothing,
Except run and hide;
Yet when you are not around,
Somehow,
Somehow you always returned to my mind:
The smooth flowing hair,
The beautiful misty eyes,
A sweetest smile, I've ever seen,
And much, much, much more....
I don't care if this dream'll never come true,
I don't care, if friends look at me as a fool,
Because falling for you itself,
It is the most foolish thing, I had ever do!
I knew the bitter ending from very start,
Yet my feeling is too strong to fight,
The love is too real to be deny,
So there I was, and here I am,
All I want is speak from my heart,
Whisper by your ear saying, 'I love you...'
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2004-01-08 08:03:16]
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by formerly_known on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:36:46 AM AEST
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| that was one lucky girl.... if my bf ever wrote anything omg need i say more |
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:03:59 PM AEST
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| Hi, I just like to correct a mistake I made: 'Yet my feeling is too [u]fight[/u] to fight,' should be- 'Yet my feeling is too [u]strong[/u] to fight', see how careless of me! ^_^ sorry. And can someone tell me how to edit it, cos I tried to sent MICK a msg as FAQ says but somehow is not working. By the way, thanks for reading my poem! ^_^ |
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:41:39 PM AEST
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Hello, whisper of night! So glad to read such an expressive poem! You have expressed what everyone hopes to have. that feeling that consumes your mind and makes you act foolish.
I wouldn't worry about correcting grammar or misspellings, if I were you, I'd just get on with more poems. But in the future, try to proof read more than one time ... and sometimes another person can see mistakes that we may not, so ask a friend to read it.
I'm a great grandmother in Kansas. I think you have talent. Your friend, Bizzy |
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:31:30 AM AEST
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Oh very nice!!! I know that you mean I had so many different crushes lol, so stupid of me, fortunately thay all passed ha! :) Very touching poem and beautiful style! I like it a lot!!
Anne :D |
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:50:35 PM AEST
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| She didn't know what she was missing, I have the same problem dear, you can talk to me ANYTIME if you need someone, great write. |
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by hawaii06 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:25:03 PM AEST
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Very good and sweet poem.......
I enjoyed it...
JAMIE |
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:37:37 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, wonderful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: a plead from my heart
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by SarahBelle on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 06:30:07 PM AEST
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| Some of the best (though undeveloped; at least mine) poetry are the poems that we write in our teenage years because that is when our emotions are every which way and when we can capture one emotion and throw it into a poem, it is just amazing how much feeling comes out! Honestly, I liked this. I am going to go read some more of yours right now. :) |
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