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For All Lost Souls
Contributed by
karoody
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:20:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Watch closely as I fade
Before my spark dies
She shall shed light on the truth
Too many of us walk through life
Dwelling on yesterday
And eternally unaware of tomorrow
Is it that we fear what we do not know?
We remain uncertain of what a moment brings
Until it is past
So we focus on moments lived
Hoping to find an answer there
Wasteful creatures are we
Looking back for solutions
Only to find the questions of yesterday
If only we looked forward
We would see that in our final resting
These questions no longer matter
Move forward...
Even if you never find what you seek
At least your mind can rest
Knowing you tried
Copyright ©
karoody
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2004-01-08 05:20:50]
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:59:28 AM AEST
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A very thoughtful write..most of us may not find what we seek..but atleast we can rest
knowing we are tired..so..rest gets us re-charged with some power..:o)...venkat |
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by xDeex on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 11:16:40 AM AEST
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| so true... great write |
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:23:10 PM AEST
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| wonderfully expressed, wise words, well written, hugs n' love, ever nessa |
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:22:36 AM AEST
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Just what I needed to hear right now. Wonderful!
Blessings. |
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 11:29:47 PM AEST
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WOW!! Bravo hun! Bravo I say!!
That is wonderful advice. Shedding the past is harder than it
sounds though. If we do not look back we are doomed to make
the same mistakes. (And some of us do anyway. We continue to
get hurt and are anxious to feel the sting of familiar ache, the
moment it leaves us, it seems.) We need to look in the direction we
are moving, however, or we'll just keep running into things. lol
GREAT write hun! Your work is so inspirational!
*hugs hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 12:24:57 PM AEST
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Wow... wow.....did I say wow yet? This one is phenomenal!!!! OMG, how so right you are, Karabear!
Very inspirational; very deep and full of meaning; very optimistic and a great lesson! I am impressed.
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Re: For All Lost Souls
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by snoopington on
Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 11:51:38 AM AEST
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i love this poem kara, i love all your work but this reminds me of the past 5years of my life and finally trying something productive in poetry even if i dont have sucsess at least i tried
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