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I'm Trying
Contributed by
karoody
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:29:25 AM in AEST
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I'm trying hard to smile, Dad
See the positive side of things
Use the lessons I've learned
But it's really cold here, Dad
And rather lonesome, too
When I look around and can't find you
I turned twenty-four this year, Dad
Though I feel much older
I will always need you around
Your soul is of another world now, Dad
Still I try to smile
But I can't seem to find a positive side of loneliness
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karoody
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Re: I'm Trying
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:00:53 AM AEST
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| How to fill the void when a your beloved Dad is not physically present?.. I feel that his spirit with positive out look on life still lives within your heart....you have to prove that you are his golden daughter who keeps his ideals alive..blessings dear girl. venkat |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 07:24:45 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:13:54 PM AEST
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Touching write, Kara..hope all is well...
Luv and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:32:27 PM AEST
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| Good and touching write. I enjoyed this. |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:19:41 PM AEST
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| awww i know its hard, ((((kara))) hang in there and im always here for you:) hugs n' lotsa love, nessa |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 12:06:36 PM AEST
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In you he is still alive.
I was gonna type I can feel your pain but ya' know?? I think I'm feeling my pain so, yeah, I can so much relate to this it hurts. I know it had to hurt. Definitely a freaking tear jerker and a lump in the ol' throat.
Damn ******* HUGE HUG
Loves ya' Karabeara!
Tim
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Re: I'm Trying
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by Alphadux on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 06:06:07 PM AEST
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| I like that last line. |
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