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A divine comedy..
Contributed by
venkat
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:23:35 AM in AEST
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A divine comedy
This life is a real drama
If we understand the plot
We can enjoy its beauty
This world is a poem written by God
If we understand its theme
We can enjoy it as a divine comedy!
A small prayer
Again and again we praise thy glory
O father of heaven! show thy mercy!
For our sins of blood we’ve repented
To hug thy spirit and to keep thy bond!
My strong desire
Let my heart bloom like a flower
To share honey of pure love with you
Let my poetry grow like a big tree
To give cool shade to you in summer
Let my mind flow like a clear stream
To quench thirst of thy parched throat
Let my poem become a beckon of light
To show you the sea shore in a dark night!
Dawn comes with light
Dawn, the daughter of the heaven comes with light
Like a virtuous women she bends opposite to men,
Her face down wards discloses many boons to men
With graceful looks she distributes jewels to devotees
The maiden has brought again the light and happiness!
8-1-2004
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venkat
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2004-01-08 04:23:35]
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by karoody on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:37:01 AM AEST
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dear friend, this is lovely...your words sang to me...thank you for sharing...
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:12:08 AM AEST
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Gah, is there no end to your talent? Venkat, the quality of your poems is just unbelievable. I liked this one quite a bit.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 08:58:18 AM AEST
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once again lovely pearls of wisdom strung together for our pleasure
Shari |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:11:52 PM AEST
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Absolutely wonderful, my friend....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 07:27:45 PM AEST
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this makes my heart sing dear friend
michelle |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:50:16 AM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem. I love the way you use similies. |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:55:29 AM AEST
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| Each poem shines with wisdom..wonderful read..thanks for sharing your thoughts.. |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by chandramohan on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:30:56 AM AEST
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Let the graceful looks of Dawn shower happyness on all people on this earth.
Beautifully composed...delightful read..
Chandramohan |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by jonteD on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:01:57 PM AEST
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| A powerful write dear sir |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:38:35 PM AEST
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Hey now,
masterpeice, strong, tender, full of luv for life and any one who reads it will be deeply humbled.
Wise words 2 live by.
huggs, luv,
emy
Oh yeah-n-I luved each magical verse. |
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Re: A divine comedy..
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:24:04 PM AEST
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| i absolutely loved the last stanza. i really liked the beginning, and its thoughts also. you have great substance, that brings me back for more. |
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