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Drifting Away
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:13:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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withdrawing
sink into myself
slowly, slowly
pull off my tentacles
--attatched
to the various unlucky people out there
I care about--
seperate the suckers
from the skin
and let my feelers
float around me
losing connections
why bother
making the effort
why bother to care
drifting away . . .
I'm losing it all
it slides from my shaky grasp
it all drifts away from me
I drift away from it all
. . . am I gone yet?
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ShadowDaughter
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2004-01-08 01:13:02]
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Re: Drifting Away
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:25:57 AM AEST
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damn, that sounded unsettlingly hopeless. sounds like something that would be said in an irritated sigh. very telling.
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Re: Drifting Away
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:20:18 AM AEST
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Don't wanna lose you. I feel like that every second of every day. Don't think I can comment further....loved the poem
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Re: Drifting Away
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:39:17 AM AEST
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This sounded freaky made me feel like all hope was lost.
And yet the last line (am I alone yet) alot of the time i wish I was alone, but it is never likely to be.
Excellent emotional poem keep it up. |
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Re: Drifting Away
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 07:00:06 PM AEST
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| So lost, so hopeless, so bitter.....I like it. Your style is really interesting! |
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Re: Drifting Away
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:20:00 PM AEST
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| Nice write. It was very dark. I don't think I fully understood it but ah well. Not a big deal. I liked it none the less. |
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Re: Drifting Away
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:31:57 PM AEST
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Sad. I hope you are doing better now. I feel like that right now, so I can relate.
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