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A Battle For Love
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:05:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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A bare-back rider
I stood my ground
Against the odds
Foes all around
My weapon sang
As it leapt out
My gaze was strong
No fear or doubt
The first attacker
Was displaced
A frightful grin
Bewitched my face
A sword approached
Its glare I saw
Its one desire
My blood to draw
My shield I raised
The blow it held
My sword flashed out
The foe it felled
A wretched soul
Impaled my mount
He reared up
Then fell to the ground
I rolled on the dirt
Then got to my feet
My sword in hand
More foes to defeat
Though time was slow
My mind was fast
I knew how to block
Each blow they cast
A spear that was thrown
A spear that I caught
It left my hand
New foes it sought
The glint I saw
Of a drawn blade
I raised my shield
The sword it stayed
I fought for a maiden
They had taken my Dove
I slew for a cause
They had stolen my Love!
I blocked, I slashed
I dodged, I slew
In anger and wrath
My sword, it flew
My bloody sword
I then let fall
For I had won
I'd slain them all
My Love I found
Alive and well
I cried for joy
For her I held
Her arm about me
I held her tight
I whispered "Love,
'Twas worth the fight
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:23:33 PM AEST
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| David, you KNOW I hate that line, "a frightful grin". I told you not to put it in!!! Now everyone will think you're crazy. Sigh, They'll be right. |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:45:03 PM AEST
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| as always, a beautiful work, even with a frightful grin! Love ya lots in the Lord |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:29:32 AM AEST
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Oh, come on Andrew. You know that is somebody took her I'd go crazy. Frightful, isn't it?
David
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:44:30 PM AEST
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David- Your my hero!
~Alicia |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 06:56:33 AM AEST
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Oh wow what a knight in shinning armour u are :) I loved the story the battle and the ending so sweet.
Well done,
Carmen |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by CarrieLynn on
Tuesday, 17th February 2004 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST
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| oh wow... thats a beautiful poem... i loved it... |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:03:08 PM AEST
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nice rythem
nice flow
nice message
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:32:34 PM AEST
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| She must've smiled after you read her this poem. I hope things go well for the two of you. |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:14:15 PM AEST
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| Wow that was very captivating :) |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by hollynicole on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST
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| beautiful wonderful ending thats the kind of man every woman needs |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by Gigi_15 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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| this is a very nice poetry. very good work...it's very sweet( i luv the ending) |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by BlindRomantic on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:37:29 AM AEST
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| nice. |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:42:02 AM AEST
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Aw, victory is sweet is it not. This reminds me of the old classic poems about knights and maidens and battles against evil. Lovely.
Ann |
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Re: A Battle For Love
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by candysears on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 07:59:27 PM AEST
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| I love your poem...Am glad you found your love...God Bless! |
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