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The Love Has Gone
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The love has gone
Or so they say
That's their excuse
For walking away
The betrayal of trust
A treason 'gainst love
It darkens the sky
No light from above
Where has love gone?
For it took my heart
What have I done?
For it tears me apart
No longer is the grass so green
No longer sings the dove
My world is turned a dismal gray
Where, oh where is love?
For love to work
There must be two
Who give up themselves
And swear to be true
For the heart that is loving
Must be willing to give
Are you willing to die
So that she might live?
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-01-07 21:47:36]
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Re: The Love Has Gone
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:54:11 PM AEST
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| Ah! I can read it, now that it's no longer in your horrific handwriting! Good job. |
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Re: The Love Has Gone
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by ToriVeigh on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:58:39 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem. I'd say it's amazingly accurate for someone that's never gone through it. I hope you never do. Great write. |
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Re: The Love Has Gone
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by SkYYBLu on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:05:26 PM AEST
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I hope you never do either...it's HORRIBIBLE! (lol) I liked this a lot. ALOT. Keep writing!
~Paige |
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Re: The Love Has Gone
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:15:40 PM AEST
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| This was just great. It spoke right at me. Thanks man. Great. Damn good. |
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Re: The Love Has Gone
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:03:46 AM AEST
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So sad. A different side of you I don't often see. Such passion you have here. It is wonderful. Such conviction and dedication and committment. Absolutely wonderful. I could go on. I love the way you're examining yourself and even questioning life. Just wonderful.
~Carrie~ |
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