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Love?
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:34:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A prison of pleasure
In a house of disgust
A bed of anger
In a room of untrust
A pool of love
In a circle of deciet
A web of confusion
In a cell so elite
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-01-07 21:34:49]
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Re: Love?
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:45:25 PM AEST
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| well written |
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Re: Love?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 11:34:53 PM AEST
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I like this...short but such depth.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Love?
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:04:18 AM AEST
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| WoW...that was the best 8 lined poem i've ever read... it is put together so well, and is so deep. great job! |
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Re: Love?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:42:53 AM AEST
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Was lost for a sec with the title love? under Dark topic, then I read your poem, and was blown away.
Short intense and emotionly charged loved the poem, I see so much truth in so little words.
Beautiful keep on writing. |
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Re: Love?
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 07:36:36 AM AEST
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short but bitter sweet
Good Write
Alec Fernandez |
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Re: Love?
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:01:33 PM AEST
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very good poem even though it is really short...it has so muh meaning..
JAMIE |
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Re: Love?
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by fredmonte101 on
Friday, 27th June 2014 @ 02:09:36 PM AEST
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| Turn to Love Himself --God! Jesus is the Answer. Get to know HIm and find out the Truth! LOVE will help you! |
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