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a midnight dream
Contributed by
whisper-of-night
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:24:55 PM in AEST
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Through the tears of ever-lasting night,
Once more, the gentle tapping of rain,
Bring you back, into my dream...
Like the ultimate butterfly,
Bearing a sweetest fantasy,
You seem so close, yet, so far...
Don't want to open my eyes,
Too afraid to realise,
What keeping me company,
is only a shadow,
A quivering shadow, of mine...
Quietly I listen to the rain's sighs,
As the tears run across my heart...
What can I do, baby,
To see that eternal flame, in your eyes!
Will it lit, by the touch of our lips?
Or burn with the love I felt,
Deep inside...
What should I do, angel,
To feel your heart beating with mine?
With every shining days,
Through hundred of lonely nights,
Together we shall dance,
Until the end of time...
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:28:01 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful, a fine write.
Welcome to the site , you are amongst friends |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:36:03 PM AEST
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| very very nice.... welcome! :) |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:39:06 PM AEST
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Welcom 2 our global family here.
Great writing and I see nuthing wrong with your English.
Good work, written like a pro.
peace, joy, luv, huggs, welcome,
emy-
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Re: a midnight dream
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by monkey on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:48:52 PM AEST
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This poem is wonderful! How long have you been writing? You sound like a pro! Welcome to the site. We're one big family here. Feel free to write anytime if you need anything. Once again, welcome and nice job.
Monkey |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 08:25:47 PM AEST
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All I can say is I wish I had that good of a command of the english language. Beautifully done and welcome.
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:04:53 PM AEST
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Welcome, welcome, welcome! I have found this to be the nicest of places and you will too! Your poem was great, I look forward to the next one.
Kie |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:25:05 PM AEST
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Welcome to the best poetry site on the net!! This is very beautiful... You don't seem to have a problem with your English to me... Keep them coming... I look forward to reading more of your work..
Jenni |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:27:11 PM AEST
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| Whats proper english? Good write. Welcome. I liked this. |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:20:20 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem with warm images, welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:32:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful! Full ov vivid imagery and very sweet!
Anne :D |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:48:02 PM AEST
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| Hey there kiddo, great write i loved it your english is just fine! |
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Re: a midnight dream
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by hawaii06 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 09:21:27 PM AEST
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good poem
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