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Untitled
Contributed by
formerly_known
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:23:40 PM in AEST
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I used to see the world in black and white.Now I find myself in a fog of grey.
I thought the good guys always won the fight, but i've learned it doesnt simply work that way.
I once believed if I loved others they'd love me too,but Ive seen that isn't always so.
I thought that inner peace would come from trusting who i am but its about trusting who i know.
Ever since the moment life began human kind solves its mysteries.So many things we try to comprehend so we draw conclusions we can believe.
Though the perils of life seem so great and hope seems so frail.
You never seem to fail to be there for me.
So when the winds of change try to blow me down and the shadows of confusion hide the truth I will run to you.
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Re: Untitled
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:26:29 PM AEST
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this is an amazing poem love the line: "I once believed if I loved others theyd love me too,but Ive seen that isnt allways so." very true and we have all experiance it.
look 4ward 2 next write |
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Re: Untitled
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:49:19 PM AEST
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"You never seem to fail to be there for me.
So when the winds of change try to blow me down and the shadows of confusion hide the truth I will run to you."
wow!! loved that!
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Re: Untitled
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by redwest802 on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:56:58 AM AEST
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| enjoyable read i had to think about it and thats what i like |
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Re: Untitled
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:09:22 PM AEST
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| This is indeed a good poem. I liked it. Very interesting. |
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