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Vampires Curse
Contributed by
Empty_Soul
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:47:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My empty soul snaps,
darkness enters, light is dead
an eternity of evil becomes me
whilst feeding off the innocence of life,
living outside of day only at night,
never to see the burning sun again
this is my curse and blessing.
I am an immortal; a vampire,
forced to live in exile, an outsider
living off others unlike me
i am alone in this hate filled world
this is my eternal curséd life.
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Empty_Soul
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2004-01-07 17:47:13]
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:56:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to the site, put up ya feet sit back and enjoy yourself....
I love your write, so full of imagery and so full of talent i cant wait for you next write
keep up th great work
all the best
Luke (lulus) |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:05:07 PM AEST
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| Hmmmmm sounds like an Anne Rice fan (Am I wrong?) like myself. I liked the way you described the pain of the vampire, good imagery as well ;). |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by monkey on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:11:13 PM AEST
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| Bravo! Good poem. Welcome to the site. Its lotsa fun here. If you need any help I'll be here. Once again, nice poem. |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:19:04 PM AEST
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Well done and welcome to our little slice of heaven! lol
Larry |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:53:16 AM AEST
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nice taste from your darkside... was this more about describing a vampire's life, or your own?
great write. |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:49:16 AM AEST
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Darkness flows within your words, life is cursed wether through Vamperism or not. Welcome to the site.
I liked the poem as I like all dark poetry keep it up I look forward to reading more. |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by fallen_eyes on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST
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| wow i never knew you had such a talent. let me know when you write any more. luv ya T xx |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:17:37 PM AEST
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| ahhh wonderful, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:00:47 AM AEST
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Truely have you described the curse,
Displayed quite wonderfully in verse,
Immortal life now tastes sour.
So well has this vampire infernal
been captured in poetry eternal.
This work is a dark, black flower.
Richard.
Soz, Best I could do. Well done. Good poem.
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:15:54 PM AEST
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| i'm not really a fanatic on poems. but i really liked this one. keep it up. |
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Re: Vampires Curse
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:25:58 PM AEST
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This was brillant. I liked it alot.. Great poem..
take care
christina |
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