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Hatred
Contributed by
monkey
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:42:46 PM in AEST
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hatred
burns within
making my whole body
tremble
trying to keep it contained
but no matter
how hard I try
its eventually too much
and I explode
with rage;
wil and unstoppable
like fire
venomous attacks
wounding my victim
I transform
from nice to vicious in seconds
like a tiger
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-01-07 17:42:46]
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Re: Hatred
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:51:36 PM AEST
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| Good I can feel the rage emanating! |
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Re: Hatred
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 07:47:03 AM AEST
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| theres alot of rage in this. Ok obvious blatent comment, but you can direct you rage at the object or person which causes it (in the form of poetry not a colt 45), and then its kinda like a self therapy thing, because with that much rage and hatred, you gotta try and calm it down, or channel it in other directions! |
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Re: Hatred
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by Empty_Soul on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:13:03 PM AEST
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great poem it flows really well, i see what you mean about the ending but it is often difficult to end a poem effecitively. nicely done though.
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