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Conquering You
Contributed by
Necromant
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:46:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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With a dagger I slash your flesh,
Your eyes widen with shock and betrayal,
With my lips I kiss your mouth to stop you from screaming,
Then I look at you and smile,
I fall on my knees and start hungrily licking the blood,
Wanting to taste you,
To absorb your essence,
You start to breathe erratically,
Battling with your will,
An escaped moan defies you and gives me an urge to continue,
Locking our eyes we come to an understanding,
With my body I’ll conquer your soul.
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Re: Conquering You
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:59:59 PM AEST
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Wow. I liked. Showed me an odd form of love so to speak. I really liked it. Mmmm I really liked it. Heh.
'I fall on my knees and start hungrily licking the blood,
Wanting to taste you,
To absorb your essence,'
I loved that part. I liked it alot. |
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Re: Conquering You
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:52:30 PM AEST
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dude i am liking this a lot, love the last line "with my body i'll conquer your soul" really interesting read, might try something like this myself. Great write.
Please read my 1st post "Vampires Curse"
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Re: Conquering You
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 08:45:02 PM AEST
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I didn't find this to be overly dark but I did think it was quite sensual. Very enjoyable to read.
Kie |
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Re: Conquering You
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:59:32 AM AEST
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| nice... very enchanting. i loved tasting this... |
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Re: Conquering You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:27:46 PM AEST
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nice. deep thought
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Re: Conquering You
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:02:06 PM AEST
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Wow, cool and scary, made me shiver, I liked the feeling it gives :D
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