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A Poem of Heartache
Contributed by
Puffer
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 09:50:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She made me laugh
She made me cry
Now she's got no alibi
She made me hurt
She made me ache
Now she's got no heart to take
She used me up
She threw me out
Now my life's in serious doubt
She lied to me
She cried to me
Now she wants it to be fine with me
But she used me
And abused me
So how can it be cool with me?
She took my heart
And with one painful dart
She tore it all apart.
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Puffer
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2004-01-07 09:50:28]
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Re: A Poem of Heartache
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:39:06 PM AEST
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this is a very emotional felt poem.. its well expressed.. good job
peace and hope
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Re: A Poem of Heartache
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:44:25 PM AEST
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Iread your first poem. They're both great. Hope everything works out for the better.
-Esther |
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Re: A Poem of Heartache
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by CountryGirl on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:33:49 PM AEST
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| Good Expression in this. Tells a reader what happened and the rhyming is great. |
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