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Storm Of Love Lost
Contributed by
Chicken
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Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 09:17:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The sky flashed with light
Thunder sounds its bass voice
The rain beats on the window
Sounding out an uncertain rhythm
In the din of the storm
I can see a figure standing in its midst
She beckons for me to come closer
So as to see into my soul
And to reclaim what she once owned
I back into the shadows
But with the storm she moves closer
Bringing with her an air of doom
I try to run but my feet are frozen
My eyes are transfixed, watching her every move
With my mind I beg her to leave
To free me of this ball and chain
With which she has shackled me to this earth
Yet still she moves closer
Until her lips are almost touching mine
The pain in her voice is obvious
When she whispers my true transgression.
-Andrew Albertson
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Chicken
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2002-08-31 09:17:39]
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Re: Storm Of Love Lost
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 09:50:47 AM AEST
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| Interesting write... |
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Re: Storm Of Love Lost
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 02:58:26 PM AEST
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| Lost loves can be hurtful and u describe well here....:-) |
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Re: Storm Of Love Lost
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by princesspurty on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 03:46:32 AM AEST
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| this is so sad, but very good write! |
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