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Surprising Anger
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 07:37:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can’t believe I’m so angry
It came as such a surprise
Some fault is mine, I agree
To make up for it, I did try
Of all people, she would know
How those words would sting
Complete disregard did she show
When hateful words she did fling
This surpasses anger over my actions
Now she’s just throwing a fit
A totally unexpected reaction
Maybe she wants to stay alone in her pit
If she really felt that way
And she truly was my friend
You’d think I’d have heard her say
The faults that I’d need to mend
People accept things easier
When coated with honey, not salt
Words put a little friendlier
Don’t sound like, “It’s all your fault!”
If she’d really wanted to help
Instead of just to hurt
She would have cared what I felt
And such meanness, she’d not blurt
If I didn’t really care
If I hadn’t thought her a friend
I wouldn’t have laid my heart bare
To the hurt she did intend
It’s not just the attack
That brings about the anger
It’s the hurt that does wrack
And the rage it does anchor
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2004-01-07 07:37:29]
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Re: Surprising Anger
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:57:11 AM AEST
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I like the emotin you show here,
Good write
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Re: Surprising Anger
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:29:09 PM AEST
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| Very poewerful and friends like that are friends not at all! I am in the same situation and we just hve to let them go and if they come back then they do love us as freidns! love:::Kirby |
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Re: Surprising Anger
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 06:36:26 PM AEST
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I truly did feel every word of this.....
Well done my friend.
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