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WHEN BLOOD CANT FLOW
Contributed by
driping_blood
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:17:11 AM in AEST
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Just cant stop the knife it slips over and over
I now how deep I can cut
Its just the rhythm
It entangles me
The blood it draw's me to it
The dripping
The taste
My wrist could be gone
I wont notes tell morning
If the blood would stop I mean
The pace it increasing
the rhythm is now ramped
There is no stopping it
I know I am dead
Yet the felling still intises me
But I made a promise one that shunt be broken
I wont give in
I wont start the blades motion
Of bloody blissfulness
The thought of the blood
Flowing down my arm
Makes me want it
Makes me want u
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2004-01-07 01:17:11]
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Re: WHEN BLOOD CANT FLOW
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 04:04:01 PM AEST
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| So damn true. Seems you're passing a bad time as well. Join the club. P.s if you're still cutting pay attention where you cut (personal experience ). The poem is good and flowing (as it should be) I like it :) |
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Re: WHEN BLOOD CANT FLOW
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:47:50 AM AEST
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Quote - "Makes me want you"...I liked this line...wow interesting and dark write...good job.
Emma |
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