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no more shadows to hide in
Contributed by
driping_blood
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:05:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I have something to say
I don't quit know how
The words won't come
They linger in the back
As I struggle to bring them forth
you slowly drift away from me
this felling I cant wash away or hide
this emotion that proves my humanity
I cant stand it
It eats at me
Day by day I fell smaller
As the sort one grows taller
(you)
I lie and lie and say its not you
But I suppose I lie to my self
This sucks I hate it
But not you
Your what I cant hate
And your always there
I think... I think
I love you
You probably wont see this
Or care that it exist
But I am hear and
And can see you tear
The pain he gave you
The joy I could bring
If you gave me a chance
Copyright ©
driping_blood
... [
2004-01-07 01:05:42]
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Re: no more shadows to hide in
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by scott_milton on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 08:18:58 AM AEST
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nice work, you bring alot of emotion and i like the structure.
...just one thing, work on your spelling more. |
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Re: no more shadows to hide in
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by CoLD on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:46:53 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem |
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Re: no more shadows to hide in
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by Angelic_Demon on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:25:21 AM AEST
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Hey, this is good, I've gone through some of your poetry so far... you're a good writer.
Mars |
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Re: no more shadows to hide in
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:29:00 AM AEST
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| very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: no more shadows to hide in
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by Barky on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 10:12:06 PM AEST
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| well written, i can relate... i like the line where you mention the emotion that proves your humanity, its all so true. |
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