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Ciòrann's Song
Contributed by
fionndruinne
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:22:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The stars are bright
Above my head
They make me to think
Of the eyes of a girl
Of a tender-smiling one
One I once knew
And will remember
She was a bright lass
As I do remember
Her hair was red
Like leaves in the fall
It fell on her shoulders
Like a rippling stream
It was soft, as I remember
Bright were the days
When she was near
It was always warm
And the birds sang sweetly
Stars shone in the day
In her eyes
My heart was glad
But she is gone
Taken away from me
It is cold; winter
Fire may not warm me
Nor may my cloak
Only her embrace could
Alas! my heart is cold
Copyright ©
fionndruinne
... [
2004-01-07 00:22:21]
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:30:43 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull even tho sad.
She's a very lucky lady.
Ooooooowwwww
higgs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:31:02 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull even tho sad.
She's a very lucky lady.
Ooooooowwwww
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:30:05 AM AEST
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| Poor Ciorann! Now how does Tasael feel about her lost love? |
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 07:11:38 PM AEST
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Sad and sweet portrayal of a memory.
Stitch |
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:53:24 AM AEST
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A beautiful lament, i imagined when i was reading this that it was a part of a great play. Sounded brilliant on my imaginary stage!
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 10:10:59 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful... I was thinking along the same lines as wildejohnny it would make a good sillouquet for a play. |
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Re: Ciòrann's Song
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:33:37 PM AEST
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Awesome!!! It's SO good! Especially after reading that "novel" of a poem. ;-)
Love,
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