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A Dark Riddle
Contributed by
Eve
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:55:02 PM in AEST
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We are the shadows-
We come and go as we please.
We are the darkness-
The source of your unease.
We envelop even the bold
We are in every story untold.
We come with the night
And dissapear with the dawn.
Gone with the night-
Unless you still hold on.
What are we?
Copyright ©
Eve
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2004-01-06 22:55:02]
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Re: A Dark Riddle
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by MissTea on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:38:32 PM AEST
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I have an unliking to one specific night flyer... the BAT! So, i doubt the answer is that, but thats the one thing(!) that came to my mind when i read your poem! Great poem, made the reader think!
Keep it up
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Re: A Dark Riddle
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:52:53 PM AEST
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Hmmmm... Very good one.. Had me thinking the same.. A Bat. Then I though.. Could it be "Dreams".. IF you think about it, they are gone when the morning comes, and most of us try to remember them, but they are hard to hold on to... But that is just my guess... Very good writting...
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Re: A Dark Riddle
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:19:32 AM AEST
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Hmm...My first inclination was 'nightmares.' But, further scrutinization led me to another answer: 'emotional memories.' Perhaps i'm wrong on both counts? At any rate, this was fantastic work all the same. But then, what else would I expect from the great Eve?
Keep writing, or be forced into the daylight,
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Re: A Dark Riddle
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:32:54 PM AEST
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| I believe that this poem is about suidisal thoughts when u are alone at night and maybe abot cutting! lol! This poem is really about something totally different hu! lol! Great poem though! Keep em coming! love:::Kirby |
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Re: A Dark Riddle
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:54:04 AM AEST
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| I dunno but I liked it. I don't care what the answer is this made me think of vampires. Heh. |
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Re: A Dark Riddle
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by Eve on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 04:07:03 PM AEST
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Majestic and VS were on it; the answer was mainly nightmares. But a lot of people have thought it was bats, and it very well could be many other things. I know I wasn't just thinking of nightmares when I wrote it.
Thanks for all of your answers.
-Eve. |
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