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Heart of Black Ice
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Our life together on the rise,
Without warning you ended it all,
You acted like I was the one you would despise,
You watched as my heart made a quick fall.
Now can you see my pain?
Look deep into my eyes,
Do you think I could love you again?
Look how you made my tears cry.
You took my mind and turned it to a paranoid state,
You twisted my heart and made my love go insane,
Is our fate a lifetime filled with hate?
Living inside this fantasy, wishing it would change.
Can you see the burning of my flames?
Is this my reality?
Can you feel the power of my pain?
Is this all just a misdirected fantasy?
I wish you could think the same thoughts as me,
Imagine blood that can cry tears,
Imagine the torment in my heart; you caused this misery,
Imagine my cries that can bleed and imagine all my fears.
It was something I could not see,
You had my mind full of demons,
I was stuck in my dreams, Could not break free,
My soul is on fire, my anger towards you steaming.
Your love was a promise you had broken,
The lies you told me to keep me with you,
The false words you said your heart had spoken,
Then you told me to leave, cause you where through.
Look at what you have done; here I am,
You made me insecure and incomplete,
You had me loving you; you lied to me, ****..
Kick me again, you do that to ones you break down to your feet.
You have so many reasons to admit you where wrong,
Will you ever face up to your faults within your mind?
You can’t do it; you try to prove you are brave and strong,
But you are hateful, hurtful, and un-kind.
Hurt all around you is what you are about,
No matter who has to pay the price?
Try to prove you wrong, and you start to shout,
I guess that is how it is, when you heart is made of black ice.
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MajesticPoet
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Re: Heart of Black Ice
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:28:27 AM AEST
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I am truly sorry that you had to go through this. You have a great talent for writing poetry, this poem shows that. When I first came to YPDC, the first poem I posted was one I thought was completly awful, yet showed the pain I was going through so very well. A very wise person told me that it always helped to write down your feelings, let the anger out, and never think about what the poem is actually like.
I enjoyed reading this poem, yet it is filled with so much sadness. Keep writing, keep letting your feelings out into your poems, and keep posting on YPDC, because your poems are very beautiful. |
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Re: Heart of Black Ice
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:50:31 AM AEST
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| DUDE! I'm like right there with ya. I loved this. I liked alot of the lines and I loved the idea behind this. Nice. Very nice. |
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Re: Heart of Black Ice
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 11:16:33 PM AEST
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| Sometimes there is complete disbelief as to how someone can treat somebody else esp in matters of the heart,then begins the painful process of learning to live again after realising they may never express any remorse for what has happened,well written |
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