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Dreaming What You Believe

Contributed by crLepley on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 07:39:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

All that is left now is your own sin
only he will ever win
people cry out in pain
because they still play this game
sometimes they just come out and shout
all the things that went wrong
how long must this pain go on
when will they all understand
all their days will not take very long
i missed the days when i came home
i missed the feeling of a happy home
i despise thoughts of leaving this life
but cannot forget the promise of right...
the darkness will be drowned out by the wonderful-white-bright-light
people are left with their own sin
knowing that he will only win
i cry out in pain
thinking they will all be gone
but it is all over now
now that i come back
i open my eyes and realize
what it was all about
trying to release all the doubt
and knowing it was not at all what it seemed
it was all but a dream.

Copyright © crLepley ... [ 2004-01-06 19:39:39]
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Re: Dreaming What You Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:20:38 PM AEST
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Deeply emotional and insightful to your inward turmoil. I loved the lines-
"i missed the days when i came home
i missed the feeling of a happy home"
Although they were sad, I understood them. Kie

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