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Lesson Learned
Contributed by
crLepley
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 07:34:04 PM in AEST
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today i learned a lesson
never will i make that mistake
tomorrow i hope to glisten
and pray for heavens sake
i really have nothing left to say
but to separate and go on my own way
together again we may be
but again ill say maybe someday
feelings will seem familiar
it might make you wanna cry
you might seem rather peculiar
so this is the feeling of what it is like to die
to wonder which ways heaven
so please forgive me when i cry
i never learned what it was to die
people used to always tell me ...
its all one big lie
right now im glad i chose not to listen
i always took into consideration
and never fell to all the intimidation
still tomorrow i hope to glisten
never will i get a chance to make that mistake
because today i can say i learned a lesson
that everything should be for heavens sake
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crLepley
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2004-01-06 19:34:04]
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Re: Lesson Learned
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:20:15 PM AEST
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I felt so much emotion and sadness in your poem. I read it a couple of times and liked it more and more....
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Re: Lesson Learned
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:06:36 PM AEST
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thats so sad, sometimes life does that to you...
Well most of the time in my experience...
99% of the time...
Anyway great write
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