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Fad of the Land
Contributed by
formerly_known
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:54:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Ima marniade
of whats hot this summer
im an early comer
bought a gulf war hummer
Every fad i feel its force
Every trend i do endorse
Got my genomes mapping
Caught my smart dog napping
Im charging up a new new thing
Im awnsering a customized ring
im starting from the place u stop
im packing for an ego trip .... Hop
Stop ... the scam u day traders in the traffic jam
Can the craze all u players out of plays
Fight the man All u suckers for a better beand they got u living off the fad of the land
Get ur pager on cuz u know mah number
ima wireless wonder
got thumbs of thunder
Soul daddies ina fire wire tumble dryer
Soul mommies broke the breaker
Soul children packin Prozac passifiers
they got me livin off the fad of the land!
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Re: Fad of the Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 07:05:52 PM AEST (User
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I had a very difficult time reading your poem.
You should maybe take advantage of the spell check.
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Re: Fad of the Land
(User Rating: 1 ) by formerly_known on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:31:21 AM AEST (User
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not to be rude but thats you... i wrote it like i wud read it as if i was reading it to a nother person so i felt it was Fine...
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