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this is just about how i feel, though it's so dramatic as the others...
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 03:55:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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this world clings, and pulls down my heart,
leaving me, crying, alone in the dark!
my family around me, see me as o'k,
i'll die if they knew, the reasons for me hiding away.
so now that i, am living back at home,
it's like,
i can't seem to escape, sometimes,
i feel back inside my cone!
with school,
i'll keep on trying,
and get up when i fall,
but all the while, i am dieing,
from feeling so small!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-06 15:55:22]
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Re: this is just about how i feel, though it's so dramatic as the others...
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by MissTea on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 04:00:49 PM AEST
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good write, deathdrop. i can see exactly where u are coming from. well written
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Re: this is just about how i feel, though it's so dramatic as the others...
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 05:13:39 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. The idea of it sounds familiar of someone I used to be close to... |
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Re: this is just about how i feel, though it's so dramatic as the others...
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by desire on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:01:01 PM AEST
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| it seems that i have found someone who writes kinda like i do on a certin level, i have yet to post them but they are coming...i enjoy reading the depths of peoples feelings,,,its great....slr |
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Re: this is just about how i feel, though it's so dramatic as the others...
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by Rockalife66 on
Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 02:24:51 PM AEST
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| Interesting. I know what you're talking about though, I feel the same, almost everyday. Well anyways keep up the good work. :) |
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