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Dreams
Contributed by
Necromant
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:38:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Visions not only of the night, but also of the day,
That gives us a hope to live, in a way,
They give us inspiration, or is it a damnation?,
To live in a dream is to live in a sweet lie,
Until at the finish line the dream end as it's time to die.
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Necromant
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2004-01-06 13:38:44]
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Re: Dreams
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by lonesomerose on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 03:00:16 PM AEST
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| short and sweet nicely done |
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Re: Dreams
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:26:03 PM AEST
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| Short and nice. I was expecting something darker with the word necro in your name... Lol. I think in this case the length does it well. I hope they all aren't this short though. I liked the inspiration/damnation part. |
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Re: Dreams
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by Empty_Soul on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:26:34 PM AEST
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great poem anne, i'm reading all your poems in reverse. lol. short and sweet, really like this.
John |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:02:22 PM AEST
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for your first poem it is really good. its a good start. keep it up.
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