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Turned On You!!!!!
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:26:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You make me Sick! u disgust me!
Look down my nose at wot u can B
Your dark and twisted, the coldest Night
Too right you want to stay n fight!
There is no battle, its over I won
Who knew how shallow u'd become,
You turn my stomach! u make me bleed
And on this pain ur illness feeds
Get out my face! I Wont Forget
I'd love to kill u!! with no regret
To inflick such pain as u have to me
No Physical damage Its Mental u see!!!
Im angry, Im mad I've lost the plot
In my heart is where you Rott
No blood on my fingers I dont have to kill
Revenge is sweeter,, Its part of the thrill
You brought these, This Love and Hate
To be messed up WAS That UR FATE?
I love u, I HATE u, I love u, I Do
Now to finish Both us too!!!
One more time get close to me, we have the knives
In this together, Take both our Lives..!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-01-06 11:26:27]
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Re: Turned On You!!!!!
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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| Great venting ... very well written ... Jan |
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Re: Turned On You!!!!!
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:10:38 PM AEST
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| Ouch... I'd hate to be on the recieving end of that. I take it this was about an x? Very good write. Lots of power in it. |
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Re: Turned On You!!!!!
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:24:14 PM AEST
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powerful write, very powerful, I like...
Not sure If this is the one I inspired you to write, but its brilliant anyways!
Alec Fernandez |
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