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That brave
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 07:51:45 AM in AEST
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I could never be that brave,
Take the fight to the grave,
Give to others every day,
Let your smile help in every way.
Pain of the past you concealed,
The heroine was never revealed,
Your life was given up for others,
All of us your sisters and brothers.
Now you are gone what do we do,
Keep up the great work just like you,
Work, don’t question the reason why,
Against all odds until the day you die.
I could never be that brave.
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jonteD
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Re: That brave
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 08:46:29 AM AEST
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| Your heart is just as great.....love it.and the poem.....sandy |
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Re: That brave
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:14:03 PM AEST
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This one brought tears to my eyes. I thought it was absolutely beautiful.
Kie |
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Re: That brave
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:52:54 PM AEST
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Jon, this is beautiful..I'm so sorry to hear of her passing.... This brought me to tears, after just talking about her yesterday. Stay strong...
Hugs and luv,
Jenni |
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Re: That brave
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by venkat on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:19:03 AM AEST
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| OoH..sory friend..I feel that she must be a great soul..and this poem is absolutely heart moving..venkat |
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Re: That brave
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by Manicmuze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:34:50 PM AEST
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I've lost a few family members to cancer in the last five years, watched them be more brave than i think i could ever be. in fact, they gave me strength probably much more so, than i did them.
What i found totally amazing is how they didn't complain, fought with all their physical strength and kept trying to live life to its fullest.
We should learn from them. Very touching poem, you pulled some heartstrings here.
Nicely done,
~ Wendy |
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