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Forgive Me
Contributed by
monkey
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:22:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a simple question
a simple word answered
broke your heart
and you turned away;
breaking my heart
three years of friendship;
shattered
with only one word
"no"
which I crushed two hearts by saying
you were my big brother
always there;
to make me smile
keeping me safe
from all evil
my guardian angel
protecting me
watching me
never resting
until I was safe
where did you go
I crave your protection
I miss you
Im sorry
please forgive me
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-01-05 23:22:34]
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Re: Forgive Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:48:45 PM AEST
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So sweet, how could anyone resist.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:24:14 AM AEST
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Nice one. Shows truth in words.. Nice writting..
Majestic
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Chanti on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:54:44 AM AEST
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Great write! I hope you and your friend are reunited again
Chanti * |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:39:49 AM AEST
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| Very nice writing... We all make mistakes and often feel sorry for them... It's obvious that you treasure this person and I believe that he'll find strenghts to forgive you and be again your "big brother"! Cheers,Vanya |
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Re: Forgive Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 04:15:59 PM AEST
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| Sounds so familiar to me. Been there hun. Keep writing. |
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