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The feelings of love mistaken
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was the one trying to lift you up,
When you thought your life had enough,
I know now it is the wrong time,
Nothing I can do to make you change your mind.
I don’t want you or anyone to feel sorry for me,
Not like you gave us a chance to be,
I am not holding back what I say,
You know it was wrong to just push me away,
To think after everything we went through,
That I would still love you,
Where you Faking when you said I love you,
I must have been so blind,
To all you say and do,
Must have been something on your mind.
I am on fire when I imagine you next to me; I am on fire when I hear you speak,
On fire burning with all loves mysteries,
In a world filled with bitter pain, and bitter doubt
I was the one falling in love, until you blocked my heart out,
How you acted, would make it like I had a bad disease,
I still see you in my dreams,
In my heart is where you make me bleed,
All good turns to bad and you still don't hear my screams,
All I did for all I do,
Even after you hurt me deep inside,
I will always truly love you,
That is a feeling I can not hide!
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MajesticPoet
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2004-01-05 21:32:03]
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Re: The feelings of love mistaken
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:31:43 PM AEST
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Good work!
I can certainly relate to this write in my past.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: The feelings of love mistaken
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by ladybug on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:01:22 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed that I mean you just took a love a had and put it into a poem very very nice work just written so perfect
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Re: The feelings of love mistaken
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:12:39 PM AEST
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A very strong, meaningful poem. It touched me.
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Re: The feelings of love mistaken
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:38:29 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your nice comments. I appreciate your reading my poetry. Thank you for the support...
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