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Seasons
Contributed by
Pyrochick
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your breath
is like a summer breeze
it smells of the fresh-dewed grass in the morning
it's as gentle as the gentlest hands
it's as sweet as the sweetest honey
but now it's turned to winter
as your breath is icy cold
it's like standing in the snow all alone
it's like waking up to a chilly cold
you turn with the seasons
thats why i can't be with you
i can't wait till next summer
when our love will wake from its sleepy slumber
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Re: Seasons
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:45:55 PM AEST
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I can relate. I used to know someone like that. It took me finding someone else for me to realize I couldn't sit around and wait for him forever. Great write, I enjoyed it!
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Re: Seasons
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:04:34 PM AEST
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you paint a beautiful picture of one of those difficult loves... wishing you an early thaw
Shari |
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Re: Seasons
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:21:18 PM AEST
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| Just read your last 3. Very good works. You haven't been on in a short bit. Good to see a poet back. |
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Re: Seasons
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 06:25:57 PM AEST
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| HEY KATHLEEN! its Christin & Kiwi! LUV THE POEMS! i read some comments that ppl said about them and they seem to like them! WOW imagine that... people liking and relating to ur poetry lol! g2g byes! |
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