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Olde New Moon
Contributed by
donnz
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:47:17 PM in AEST
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Cold Night Moon
Winter cold
New years old cold
Familiar As broken bones
Too tight shoes
Hole in the sole
Hole in the soul
Where warm fuzziest
Fell away
Lost
Pain too large to lose
Carried as a cloak over one shoulder
Concealing my off balance
Black painted limping stick
I think___ I feel___ NO thing
Should have embraced the Tao
Where nothing is worth the seeking
and the pain of life just is___
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Re: Olde New Moon
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:56:01 AM AEST
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nothing is worth seeking says the tao? thats a new thought for me. I'm always learning something new.
The pain of life is what makes the good days worth it.
All poets know that without pain we wouldn't know love or beauty, or the wonderful feelings that come with them. READ THE POETRY....without pain we would have no poetry...most of it is whining about pain. LOL
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Re: Olde New Moon
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by jme on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:11:58 PM AEST
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| Great way with the words. Simple, but it says so much. |
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