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Honesty
Contributed by
formerly_known
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:55:31 PM in AEST
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Boy ... you know ur place.
Lies do not become us
Real is more attractive
then a slick polished mask
Dig deep down
I know theres more between us
Theres bound to be a question your dying for ask.
If u can be honest i cant be too!
If you take the first step ill follow you through!
but no one wants to bleed and hide.
No one wants to hurt alone inside
Dont Close your eyes truth contains so much beauty.And though it scars your soul it can heal the wounds it makes.
You've been decived to think the pain is to be dreaded
When you've got nothing left it will give more then it takes.
If u cant find peace it will help it find you.
Idont know how or why but Honesty will never leave you!
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Re: Honesty
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:27:59 PM AEST (User
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I think a lot of my writing is stupid, but they turn out fine.... I think it's the same here-- you might think it sucks, but it's got a lot of good stuff in there. Point being- "And though it scars your soul, it can heal the wounds it makes". That line hit the mark right on target. It summed up everything there is about truth. Amazing line. Extremely well written, that one is......
Nice job =)
God bless,
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