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Burdens~~*
Contributed by
formerly_known
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:53:42 PM in AEST
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They all fall like a million pieces.Falling from a blue sky.Kissing your cares goodbye.They all fall like a million pieces a tiker tape parade high now your free to fly.
Carring a millstone malaise.
Its been pullin down your Gaze
You pound the Pavement
but it dont give or care
its weight aint yours to bare
Why you hold grudges in old jars?
Why you wanna show off all your scars?
Whats it gonna take to lay a few burdens down its a beautiful sound
When that muffled sigh says your barely getting by ... Cut your burdens loose and just simplify...simplify
This is not your floor your going higher than before.Drop the weight now and watch out for the look out guide and look outside.
Cause when u lay your burdens down when you drop them burden.What a free fall What a thrill . Bury them all in a land fill. Kissing your Cares goodbye!
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Re: Burdens~~*
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by formerly_known on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:54:52 PM AEST
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| okay people be honest on this poem tell me what you think plz.. its the 1st time ive gone public with my writing so ya know |
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Re: Burdens~~*
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:00:31 PM AEST
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let me just say you will be a wonderful addition to our poetry family and will be looking forward to reading more
michelle |
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