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*A Look In To Her Eyes*
Contributed by
carebear
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:33:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A look in to her eyes red with hurting pain,
The bruises on her body leave only to return again.
Moving in slow motion her razor makes its marks blood is,
Flowing toward the ocean turning it heartaching thick of pain and strife.
Drowning in her own pool of broken tears,
Looking beyond the graves for something to soothe her fears.
Walking through the darkness cold and brutal nights,
Her knees are skun up her lips are cracked.
Her nightmares become reality,
The stabbing of those hundreds of knifes ripping away her flesh .
Rainy nights pouring down chiling her to the bone leaving her to die alone,
Memories of sadness haunt her tonight.
Her childhood ghosts wrapped around her soul,
Burning a new fresh scar in to her disgraceful heart.
Ranging emotions bottle up inside tearing her insides apart,
She draws her style of artwork with her razor,
Her blood on her pale delicate skin.
©Care
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carebear
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2004-01-05 16:33:41]
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Re: *A Look In To Her Eyes*
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:05:06 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing. I think this is my favourite of yours babe.
Burning a new fresh scar in to her disgraceful heart.
That line was amazing this was all so great and dripping with emotion. Aggh I loved it all!
Bobo (Joel)
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Re: *A Look In To Her Eyes*
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:26:00 AM AEST
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sooo dark an emotional
Great write
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Re: *A Look In To Her Eyes*
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 04:42:57 PM AEST
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| Mmmmm... So beautifully dark. I love it. |
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Re: *A Look In To Her Eyes*
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:18:13 PM AEST
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| very very good write.. i really enjoyed it.. you have a lot of talent.. AMI JO |
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