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Hate of an ex
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:52:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I hate you so
Yet you hang on
refusing to let me go
I left you, yet you are always around
it's like you try to hunt me down
You cause pain and anger
it's all part of your sick game
even if you were the last person on this earth
I'd never even call your hideous name!
Happiness I won't find
You stole my light, filled it with all that crawls
through the cracks of the dark corners of the night
My dreams are evil burning me with hate
in my soul
thinking of even staying with you makes me realize I'm a fool
I run from you
I hate your exsistance
Demons inside your soul
sucking out goodness taking
what don't belong to you
I escaped in vain
you clutch at my soul to take
the rest of what is left
You keep feeding off the brightness of a soul
that don't belong to you
I severed my ties
I forget you
I don't recall your name or even what
you looked like
so to me , you never exsisted
JENNA
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Re: Hate of an ex
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:51:41 PM AEST
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| Yes, Jenna that was great. Don't let em hold you down ever again. That's right they don't exist anymore they died the last time they hurt us they ceased to be in our plane of being. I loved this one. Great write. |
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Re: Hate of an ex
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by FireStorm12 on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:37:06 PM AEST
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Nice work Jenna. However at least remember what they looked like. If you forget EVERYTHING about them...you might get suckered again! I know...my ex left me for someone else...so I can relate to this. I hope things work out for you!
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Re: Hate of an ex
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:00:46 AM AEST
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You make an excellent job of describing something we all have to go through in todays world.
I wrote a poem on this period in my life from another point of view ("He's not the only one")
but it hasn't got the venom that yours has.
bob
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Re: Hate of an ex
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:02:34 AM AEST
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You make an excellent job of describing something we all have to go through in todays world.
I wrote a poem on this period in my life from another point of view ("He's not the only one")
but it hasn't got the venom that yours has.
bob
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