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Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament)
Contributed by
norm
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:59:08 PM in AEST
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Everyone keeps bothering me, they won't let me be,
I look up to God and ask,"Why me?"
I lock myself in my room and sit down on my bed.
I hate my life..would I be better off dead?
My head hurts from crying; I can't take the pain,
I hate my life; I'm going insane.
My eyes are burning as I lay, crying in my bed,
There are too many things, going on in my head.
I hate my family, nothing I do is ever good enough,
I try my best to do well, my friends say my life's not that tough.
Sure, I have my health and I'm really smart,
But I feel my life is falling apart.
I don't have many friends, I'm overweight,
I sure don't love things more than I hate.
My sister's a *****, I hate her too.
She curses and hits me, and treats me like I'm two.
No one understands how much pain I'm in,
I wish someone did..just one true friend.
Someone who could right now be nice to me
And hold me tight and comfort me.
Someone to wipe my tears away whenever I cry.
But there's no one like that and I wonder why?
I'm filled with hurt, anger, and confusion inside.
Far to often at this point I'll consider suicide.
It seems like it's the perfect escape from my pain.
I jhave nothing to lose, tho, nothing to gain.
One simple task to end my life.
Will it be a gun? pills? poison? or a knife?
But killing myself is too harsh. I'd never do that.
Just because I hate my family, my life, my fat.
And no one can help me..I wonder why?
So until I find out, I'll just sit here and cry...
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norm
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2004-01-05 14:59:08]
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Re: Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament)
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:14:20 AM AEST
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Dear Melissa,
I'm amazed at your talent! Each time I read one of your poems, I can feel your emotions, your heartfelt tones. I'm so amazed because I know this isn't really you....how are you able to completely undo YOU? Wonderful gift....keep up the good work, I'm so glad you are happy, and this is not true.
lovingly
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Re: Melissa's Poem #3 (Melissa's Lament)
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:06:01 PM AEST
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| You really know how to get that emotion out in your poetry thats great work! Well done! Christina |
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