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what have you done?
Contributed by
doc
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Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 08:10:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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what have you done to my aching heart?..to fill it with laughter and song.
what have you done to my longing soul?..to bring such warmth and tenderness..
what have you done to my mind?..to want and need you so much.
so...what have you done?......just you being you...and the love you exude...has brought new life to this tattered existence,none other could before ..nor will ever again
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Re: what have you done?
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 08:29:18 AM AEST
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Passionate words as all yours are doc..this is beautiful..
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Re: what have you done?
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 01:56:24 AM AEST
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Hi,
chrissie am glad to sea you are still writing,i enjoy reading
your work.keep up the good write.
richard campbell. |
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Re: what have you done?
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by MisterRight on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 12:55:42 PM AEST
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That one actually put a smile on my face... trust me, it's been awhile.
Touching piece of work Doc, well writen.
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Re: what have you done?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 11:12:10 PM AEST
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Lovely piece of writing here, Doc..
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